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Sunday, August 18, 2019 - 20:30

Mon voyage parisien

J'ai emmené mon mari à Paris l'année dernière pour une surprise d'anniversaire! Nous avons passé un merveilleux voyage et nous avons particulièrement apprécié visiter le Louvre. Il faisait froid mais il y avait beaucoup moins de touristes en février!
Cette année, je lui ai acheté une expérience de vol à voile

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The learner's ability to pronounce words shared by the people of a particular country or region of the language they are learning.

Good effort at accent. Quite close to that of a native speaker
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Fluency

The learner's ability to speak continuously by chunking and linking words together. For example, instead of saying very slowly, "I - am - poor. I - have - no - money" like a robot, a fluent speaker would say, "I'm poor because I don't have any money."

Speech is relatively smooth; some hesitation and unevenness caused by rephrasing and searching for words
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Smooth and fluid speech; few to no hesitations; no attempts to search for words; volume is excellent
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Able to identify and produce correct intonation, word stress and rhythm patterns with 50-90% accuracy.
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The learners' ability to enunciate the various consonants, consonant blends, vowels, and vowel blends in words, words linked together, and words in sentences.

The pronunciation contained some individual word pronunciation errors. Around 3-4 errors
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Nana Maj's picture
I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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Bonjour !

Je viens de relire votre texte et j'ai aussi écouté votre audio. 

Commentaires : Excellent effort, pas beaucoup de fautes d'orthographe mais la prononication a besoin d'un peu plus de travail. Si vous avez besoin d'aide en terme de prononciation, je peux vous aider via Skype quand vous le désirez !

J'ai corrigé votre texte et ai attaché un enregistrement audio aussi.

Bonne chance !!

Nana :)

Correction:

Mon voyage parisien (pas besoin de majuscule dans le titre sauf si c'est un nom propre)


J'ai emmené mon mari à Paris l'année dernière comme surprise d'anniversaire ! (espace avant le point d'exclamation)/ (comme = as)

 

Nous avons eu un merveilleux voyage et nous avons particulièrement apprécié la visite du Musée du  Louvre. (apprécier + nom)/(nom complet du musée)

 

Il faisait froid mais il y avait beaucoup moins de touristes en février ! (espace avant le point d'exclamation)



Cette année, je lui ai offert une expérience de vol à voile. (''offrir'' est beaucoup mieux qu'''acheter'' lorsque c'est un cadeau)


 

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