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Hello Imam,

 

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Hi again. Yes, I think breaking the sentence in two...

Sunday, December 9, 2018 - 00:03

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I Tell you , i like to go to the beach with my family and i like to visit my friends too, i would like to visit to Canada and Italy because i Have family there. Besides that the people are enjoying the vacation at a Safari they are taking some picture to the animals, they like to go to the beach on holiday, AND i like to go with them. They love to spend time with their friends and family Is the reason that i like to do the same on holiday because is amazing.

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I learn : English (Beginner) French (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) German (Beginner)
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Great job Caterine,

 

I'm really impressed with you written English. I would love to go to Canada too. Whereabouts in Canada do your family live?

 

Just a few things I've spotted to help you improve your English writing skills.

 

1. "i" - when referring to yourself, always use the capital "I". -> "I like to go to the beach with my family and I like to visit my friends".

2. at a Safari the correct preposition is "on" "the people enjoy going on a safari.

3. they are taking some pictures to the animals the correcct preposition here is "of". They take pictures of the animals.

4. because is amazing you forgot the word "it" here to refer back to what they like doing. "It is amazing".

 

Make sure you keep posting texts and audios on here so native English speakers like me can help you out smiley

 

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Ros Watson's picture
I learn : Italian (Beginner) French (Beginner)
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Well done!  A really interesting post!  A few tweaks which should help.  When we speak about activities,  it's more natural to use the gerund or "ing" form of the verb rather than the infinitive so "I like going to the beach" rather than "I like to go to the beach".

I Tell you , i I want to tell you that I like to go going to the beach with my family and i like to visit visiting my friends too, . i I would like to visit to [we say "go to" but just "visit" - without "to"] Canada and Italy because i I Hhave family there. Besides that the people are enjoying the vacation at a Safari they are taking some picture to the animals, they like to go to the beach on holiday, AND i like to go with them. [This is a very long sentence!!  Try breaking it up by saying it slightly differently:  People really enjoy Safari holidays where they can take pictures of the animals.  They love going to the beach when they are on holiday and I like going with them.] [Using the "ing" form of the verb is very useful when we are describing activities.  It sounds more natural than using the infinitive ("going" - not "to go"]They love to spend time [spending time] with their friends and family.   Is  This is the reason that i like to do the same on holiday because is it's amazing.  

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