I believe that tourism makes more good to society than harm, because It bring local development, cultural changes, economic grows. It opens doors for a new way to see and connect the world.
To make a sustainable tourism, local goverments must work in education and environment strategies that being capable to really impact into the local population.
The biggest threat to society and the environment is coulb be the production of garbage.
Category | Adequate to good | Good to Excellent | Needs work |
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Grammatical Accuracy The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was." | There are 3-4 grammatical errors People thought this 2 | There are 0-2 grammatical errors People thought this 1 | There are 5 or more grammatical errors People thought this 1 |
Punctuation The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases. | There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation. People thought this 0 | There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation. People thought this 4 | There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation. People thought this 0 |
Spelling The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order | There are 3-4 spelling errors People thought this 0 | There are 0-2 spelling errors People thought this 4 | There are 5 or more spelling errors People thought this 0 |
Style The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience | Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion. People thought this 1 | Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged. People thought this 2 | Quite hard to understand. People thought this 1 |
I believe that tourism makes more good to society than harm, because It bring local development, cultural changes, economic grows. It opens doors for a new way to see and connect the world. To make a sustainable tourism, local goverments must work in education and environment strategies that being capable to really impact into the local population. The biggest threat to society and the environment is coulb be the production of garbage.
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Hi Patricia, thanks for your observations, I really appreciate your time.
I am going to work so hard on your tips.
Regards,
Hello Joseling,
Welcome to Lingora. Great to have you here.
I completely agree with you - tourism is very beneficial to hosts countries and their local communities. My favourite hobby is travelling and visiting new countries. What about you? What is your favourite hobby?
With regards to your English, I am very impressed. However, I would recommend you pay close attention to what Patricia has pointed out. Make sure you take her points into account and continue to post audios and texts here on Lingora so native English speakers like us can help you improve!
Hello Edhutchins88, nice to meet you.
One of my favourite hobby is gardening, I do love to take of my garden specially my coconuts and veraneras plants. Actually in my country travelling is kind of expensive hobby so I can say that i like it, but unfortunately I have not the chance and money to do it.
I hope to win lottery soon to travel around the world. just kidding!!! :)
Hi!
Thanks for this!
Well done on your spelling and punctuation! 'Environment' can be a tricky one to get right, I've seen people who I know get it wrong a number of times!
There were just a few errors already mentioned above that caused confusion.
Thanks,
Becky :)
A very thoughtful and articulate piece of writing. Just a few tweaks as you are using quite advanced structures! Well done and keep posting!
I believe that tourism
makes more good to society than harm, [does society more good than harm] because Itbring[stimulates] local development, cultural changes,economic grows[and economic growth]. It opens doors for a new way to see and connect the world.To make
a sustainable tourism[tourism sustainable], local goverments mustwork in[work on]education[educational] andenvironment[environnmental] strategies thatbeing[are] capable [of]toreallyimpactinto[impacting] the local population.The biggest threat to society and the environment
is coulb[could] be the production of garbage.