This paragraph represents my opinion regarding Bird Box Movie
(If you see it, you’ll take your life)
This movie shows many important traits that are missing in our lives. The first important one is PATIENCE. Being patient in awful situations, accept living in unwanted events and therefore being responsible to find solutions. That's what the mother did in the movie when she had to live in terrible events, but this didn't prevent her from taking the responsibility of raising two children and survive. If you look at people in our society today, you’ll find a lot of parents who have left their children, killed them for unreasonable reasons.
The second trait is SACRIFICING. Imagine a person who would accept to sacrifice in his life for you. Being unselfish, that’s exactly what we need to live happier. People should start to understand that sacrificing is not a description created only for mothers or for those who are in love. You can also sacrifice for those people you'll meet them for the first time. That’s what Charlie did when he sacrificed with his life to save the lives of four people he met them for the first time
The third trait is about FAITH. We have to believe that regardless of any situation, we can reach everything we want if we believe in ourselves. That’s what the mother did when Rick told her it is an impossible mission to pass through the river without losing any of the team, but she believed that she will make it and she did it.
Ultimately, much respect for those who don’t depend on their eyes to see how life look like (blind people), but instead they follow their heart to live happily with teaching us how silly we are when we focus on our daily life’s problems.
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.