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News summary of March 13th

Jung Joon-young, a K-pop singer has taped sex videos without the women's consent and shared them via a mobile messenger app, reported on Monday. According to SBS, a TV channel, they have obtained 10 months' worth of dialogue and it shows some 10 women have fallen victim to this crime. Some footage was uploaded around the end of 2015 as proof that Jung had had sex with a woman, provided to the members of a group chat room. Jung has also taken pictures of unconscious women and footage of body parts of waitresses at hostess bars. Jung's agency has released a report saying they are checking facts with Jung. The police has yet to start an investigation into Jung.

Original Article: http://m.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20190311000832

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Bananap. Good job! Keep going, You are progressing daily! Regarding your text, here are some suggestions:

Jung Joon-young, a K-pop singer has taped sex videos without the women's consent and has (parallel structures) shared them via a mobile messenger app. This was reported on Monday. According to SBS, a TV channel (If you want to talk about a characteristic of the TV channel, you can say it that way.), they have obtained 10 months' worth of dialogue. and It shows some 10 women have fallen victim to this crime. Some footage was uploaded around the end of 2015 as proof that Jung had had sex with a woman. The footage provided to the members of a group chat room. Jung has also taken pictures of unconscious women and footage of body parts of waitresses at hostess bars. Jung's agency has released a report saying (Also, stating) they are checking the facts with Jung. The police have yet to start an investigation into Jung.

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Thank you for your corrections! I am planning to make flashcards of all the errors I have made so far and review them. Actually, I have already converted some of them into flashcards, just have not finished all of the errors.

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Well written as usual, Bananap!

Very little to correct.  Well done!  Ros

Jung Joon-young, a K-pop singer has taped sex videos without the women's consent and shared them via a mobile messenger app, SBS, a TV channel, reported on Monday. According to SBS, a TV channel they have obtained 10 months' worth of dialogue and it shows some 10 women have fallen victim to this crime. Some footage was uploaded around the end of 2015 as proof that Jung had had sex with a woman.  This footage was provided to the members of a group chat room. Jung has also taken pictures of unconscious women and footage of body parts of waitresses at hostess bars. Jung's agency has released a report saying they are checking the facts with Jung. The police has have yet to start an investigation into Jung.

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Hi, thanks for this, your English is improving each time that you leave a comment!

Just a few changes below:

- without the consent of the women

- it shows ten women have fallen victim to this crime

- Some of the footage was uploaded towards the end of 2015 and is proof that Jung had had sex with a woman, then provided it to members of a group chat room

- The police have yet to start an investigation into this case involving Jung.

Thanks,

Becky :)

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