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Vacations

My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday, they like to go to the beach and visit landmarks in my country.
In my situation, I like to go swim in the pool or go to eat at the restaurant then go to the movies also I like to go to the mall, I like to do different activities on holiday .

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I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday holidays such as going to go to the beach and visiting landmarks in my country.

In my situation, I like to go swiming in the pool or go to eat at the a restaurant. After that, I like to go to the movies also I like to go to the mall. I like to do different activities on holiday holidays.

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Toscano's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate)
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Thank you :)

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi, Toscano. Hope you are doing well. Kjcoffin has provided great suggestions, here is my rewritten version:

My family and my (no need to repeat) friends like to go going (shows habits or likes) to different places on holidays, they like to going to the beach and visiting landmarks in my country.
In my situation case (a more common expression), I like to go swimming in the pool or go to eating at the a restaurant. Then, I like to go to the movies and also I like to go to the mall. I like to do different activities on holidays.

 

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I learn : English (Intermediate)
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Thank you!! :)

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Ros Watson's picture
I learn : Italian (Beginner) French (Beginner)
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Nice writing Toscano!  Nothing much to add.   I would say that "on holiday" is the correct phrase as you wrote it ;).  Keep posting and looking forward to hearing from you again soon!

Ros

 

My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday, ][a semi-colon " ; " is better here as it separates two clauses with main verbs] they like to go to the beach and visit landmarks [alternatively you could say "and go sightseeing"] in my country.

In my situation, [You could say "Personally here] I like to go swim in the pool or go to eat at the a restaurant then go to the movies[.] also I [also] like to go [you could vary it here by using "going to the mall" instead] to the mall[.]  I like to do different activities on holiday

 

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I learn : English (Intermediate)
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Thank you! :)

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