Hello. Today I talk about my holidays. If you have any advice for me, please tell me
I love going to holidays!
In the months of summer I always like go to the beach with my best friends. We spend all the day in the beach and our objectif is to achieve the best sun tan! We go to places in the Mediterranean countries like the Spain and Italie. We always have a very nice time. In the evenings we go out together to eat in the restaurants and sometimes we go to the discos after that. But often we are too tired so we go back home to rest.
I don't go to the holidays with my family now. I prefer the holidays with my friends because it is more fun. My family don not like do the same things as me when they go to holidays.
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.