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Hi Oleks,

It sounds like there is trouble ahead...

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Thank you, Kealin!

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Hi Kealin! Thank you! "Won't be able to" sounds better...

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Hi Ed! Thank you! I will need to learn conditional...

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18 hours 18 min ago

Hello my name is hamza younis and I am from jordan it’s arab contry and I need to learn English and Spanish

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Grammatical Accuracy

The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."

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The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.

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The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Hamza. Welcome to Lingora! It seems that you already know English. All you need to do now is practice the skills you have learned and fine-tune them to become proficient. You can post text and audio here and get corrected. That way, you will improve your English skills in no time. The more you post and get corrected, the more you learn. Regarding your text, here is how I would rewrite it.

Hello. My name is Hamza Younis and I am from Jordan. It’s (Contraction are not suitable for writing.)  an Arab Country. I need to learn English and Spanish. (If you need to learn them, it means that you need it for work, education, etc. If you want to learn them, it means that you have the desire to do so.)

Good luck!

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edhutchins88's picture
I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Hi Hamza,

Great to have you here. As Aliakbar has pointed out, the best way for you to make progress with your speaking and writing skills in English is to practice as much as you possibly can. English speakers like us will be happy to evaluate your texts and audios and help you improve.

What is life like in Jordan? I am from London, United Kingdom. Now I live in Manchester. I like it here, but it rains a lot and we do not get a lot of nice, sunny weather.

With regards to your English, Aliakbar has already done a good job of evaluating it.

Looking forward to hearing more from you soon :-)

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kjcoffin's picture
I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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Good luck. If you want, we can start a language exchange where I can teach you English and you can teach me a little Arabic. Just let me know

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Ros Watson's picture
I learn : Italian (Beginner) French (Beginner)
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Hello Hamza

Welcome!

You've come to the right place!  Just post something on the website and we will help with any queries, etc that you have.

Ros

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