Lingorocks leaderboard

Recent Comments

Lynette's picture

Hello Shiomi,  Well done, only one spelling correction "...

7 hours 25 min ago
Oleks's picture

Hi Ali! Thank you! I'm just repeating what I’ve learned...

Saturday, December 14, 2019 - 23:59
Oleks's picture

Hi Ed! Thank you! No, I only made a few one-page sites,...

Saturday, December 14, 2019 - 23:56
Oleks's picture

Hi Ed! Thank you! As for the underground houses - no, I...

Saturday, December 14, 2019 - 23:35
Aliakbar Majidi's picture

Hello! I’m Shiomi from Japan. I started to use Lingoria...

Saturday, December 14, 2019 - 21:31

I don like going to the same places on holidays

Visiting different places is the best on holiday

Undefined
Select Language: 
CategoryAdequate to goodGood to ExcellentNeeds work
Grammatical Accuracy

The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."

There are 3-4 grammatical errors
People thought this
0
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
People thought this
5
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
People thought this
0
Punctuation

The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.

There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
People thought this
0
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
People thought this
5
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
People thought this
0
Spelling

The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order

There are 3-4 spelling errors
People thought this
0
There are 0-2 spelling errors
People thought this
5
There are 5 or more spelling errors
People thought this
0
Style

The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience

Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
People thought this
0
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
People thought this
4
Quite hard to understand.
People thought this
0
Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
7643

Hi Caty. Welcome to Lingora! Here, you can practice your English skills with the help of native speakers. First of all, I suggest that you post longer text or audio, that way, the evaluation will be more precise.

Regarding your text, here is how I would rewrite it.

I don’t [It is better not to use contractions in writing.] like going to the same places on holidays.

Visiting different places is the best thing to do on holidays.

“Holidays” is a great topic to talk about. What do you usually do on holidays? What places have you visited so far? Do you prefer package tours or independent travel?

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet
Caty's picture
Caty :
I learn : English (Intermediate)
35

Thanks

Comment Rating : 
5
Average: 5 (1 vote)
Ros Watson's picture
I learn : Italian (Beginner) French (Beginner)
6663

Hi Caty

Aliakbar has already made the only corrections that are needed.  It would be great to hear more from you!  I would love to know which are your favourite places to visit and where you would like to travel for the first time!

I have a house in Italy so we usually just go there.   Having a holiday home makes it difficult to go anywhere else!  This year, though, we spent 4 days in Corfu and then got the boat across to Italy. 

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet
edhutchins88's picture
I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
7896

Hi Caty,

Welcome to Lingora! Great to have you on board here smiley

Like you, I like to visit and explore new places and hate going to the same place each year. Which countries have you visited?

I am looking forward to hearing more from you. As Aliakbar has pointed out, the more you post on Lingora the more progress you will make with your speaking and writing skills in English.

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet
Caty's picture
Caty :
I learn : English (Intermediate)
35

Thanks

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet
Lynette's picture
I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
540

Good job Caty.  As you expand your vocabulary you will be able to write longer texts.

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet
kjcoffin's picture
I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
3725

don't like going to the same places on holidays. 

Visiting different places is the best during holidays/the holiday season

Comment Rating : 
0
No votes yet