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Thank you, Kealin! At last not a single extra comma!

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Bayan Odeh is Genetic laboratory technician with BA degree in Biotechnology from Balqa Applied University, in 2019. Within a four years Bachelor degreeshe has been willing to carry out experiments, and writing technical reports. Bayan further assisted in a research made to detect the presence of Erwinia amylovorabacteria in ornamental plants in microbiology lab at Hamdi Mango Research Center. During her training at The National Center for Diabetes Endocrinology and Genetics, she learned about FMF, PKU and SMA diseases and dealt with different types of techniques.  Bayan`s computer skills are, similarly, varied and well-maintained. 

Bayan speaks mother tongue Arabic, fluent English, has very good spoken and written communication skills both in Arabic and English and is capable of working independently or within a team, being involved extensively in outdoors and indoors work. She shows a full control over the designed tasks with the ability to properly define priorities, and flexibility with the working hours and working locations as well as adaptability to work situations as necessary.

 

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I learn : English (Beginner)
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I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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Bayan Odeh is a Genetic laboratory technician with BA degree in Biotechnology from Balqa Applied University (no comma) in 2019. Within a four years four-year Bachelor degreeshe has been willing to carry out experiments (no comma needed here) and writing technical reports. Bayan further assisted in a research study made/created to detect the presence of Erwinia amylovorabacteria in ornamental plants in the microbiology lab at Hamdi Mango Research Center. During her training at The National Center for Diabetes Endocrinology and Genetics, she learned about FMF, PKU and SMA diseases and dealt with different types of techniques.  Bayan`s computer skills are, similarly, varied and well-maintained. Similarly, Bayan's computer skills are varied and well maintained. 

Bayan speaks mother tongue Arabic, which is her mother tongue/which is her native language, and also speaks fluent English. She also has very good spoken and written communication skills both in Arabic and English and is capable of working independently or within a team as she is  involved extensively in outdoors outdoor and indoors indoor work. She shows a full control over the designed tasks with the ability to properly define priorities. She also has flexibility with the working hours and working locations as well as adaptability to work situations as necessary. (The previous sentence can be rewritten as, "She is also flexible with regards to working hours and locations as well as adaptability to work situations if needed/necessary.)

 

It may seem like you made a lot of errors, but overall this is written pretty well. Good job

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I learn : English (Intermediate) French (Beginner)
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Thank you for your help, I will take your useful comments under advisement. 

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I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Well done, Bayan. So you are a scientist!

As Kjcoffin has mentioned, your text is well-written and everybody can understand it. Keep up the good work!

Bayan Odeh is a Genetic laboratory technician with a BA degree in Biotechnology from Balqa Applied University, (no comma) in 2019. Within a four years four-year Bachelor degree, she has been willing to carry out experiments, (no comma) and writing technical reports. Bayan further assisted in a research made conducted/done to detect the presence of Erwinia amylovora bacteria in ornamental plants in the microbiology lab at Hamdi Mango Research Center. During her training at The National Center for Diabetes Endocrinology and Genetics, she learned about FMF, PKU, (comma needed) and SMA diseases and dealt with different types of techniques. Similarly, Bayan`s computer skills are, similarly, varied and well-maintained.

Bayan speaks mother tongue Arabic, fluent English Bayan speaks Arabic, which is her native language and speaks English fluently. She also has very good spoken and written communication skills both in Arabic and English and is capable of working independently or within a team, being as she has been involved extensively in outdoors and indoors work. She shows a full control over the designed tasks with the ability to properly define priorities, andShe also has flexibility with the about working hours and working locations as well as adaptability to work situations as necessary. (I like Kjcoffin’s suggestion for this sentence.)

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I learn : English (Intermediate) French (Beginner)
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Thank you Sir, yes I am. 

I also find his suggestion more appropriate. Thank you for helping me to improve my text.

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Hi Bayan Odeh,

Wow! I am so impressed with your personal profile. What are your aims for the future? Would you like to work on the development of a powerful new drug to combat diseases such as Diabetes? I find that it's always good to put your future ambitions in your personal profile.

With regards to your written English, Aliakbar an Kjcoffin have both done a great job of evaluating it. I would add the following comments

1. Bayan Odeh is a Genetic laboratory technician with a BA degree in Biotechnology from Balqa Applied University, (no comma) in 2019 - Bayan Odeh is a Genetic laboratory technician who recently graduated in Biotechnology / received her BA degree in Biotechnology from Balqa Applied University, (no comma) in 2019

2. Within a four years Bachelor degree - I would use the word "during" here. "During her four-year Bachelor's Degree." (In short, "within" implies a limit or deadline; "during" indicates a time frame.)

 

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Well, I like pharmaceutical sector, but I found sex and human reproduction more enthusiastic. I will take your advice regarding the Personal  Profile into consideration, thank you for your kindness btw. 

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