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Thank you, Ed! I think you can draw good drudles. About...

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Horses

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The horse is a mammal of the equine family.Horses have multiple types that differ in their shape , speed , size, and stamina including the Arabian horse and native hybird horse between theArabic and English and dedicated to the most famouse flat races in the world and also the barbarian .Horse have many colours including kumite , blond, red , hazel, brown , black, grey,and white .Among the characteristics of beauty for horses the presence of partridge has a hoof , white in the whites in the front , the capacity of th eyes , black straightness, muscle strength , and waist tightness.The horse was considered a manifestation of strength, prestige, and power.

Friesian  I love its colour . 

 

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Faye W.C.'s picture
I learn : French (Beginner)
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Great job! Have you ever riden a horse?

The horse is a mammal of the equine family. Horses have multiple types that differ in their shape , speed , size, and stamina. (Start a new sentence) This includes the Arabian horse and native hybird horse between the Arabic and English and dedicated to the most famouse (famous-spelling) flat races in the world and also the barbarian (I would suggest fixing this sentence. It seems like you are discussing two different horses? Use two sentences to describe each). Horses have many colours including kumite , blond, red , hazel, brown , black, grey,and white .Among the characteristics of beauty for horses the presence of partridge has a hoof , white in the whites in the front , the capacity of the eyes , black straightness (do you mean straight black hair? or mane), muscle strength , and waist tightness.The horse was considered a manifestation of strength, prestige, and power.

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Faye ,

unfortunatly no sad, but I do love them .

thanks again for correcting my article.

 

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Fantastic effort! yes

I absolutely love horses. I really enjoy going horse riding! It can be very dangerous though.

Here are some of my observations.

1. Horses have multiple types - There are many different types of horses that differ in....

2. native hybird horse between the Arabic and English  - a  hybrid crossbreed between the Arabian and the English horse.

3. Horses have many colours including kumit - Horses come in many different colours.

4. Among the characteristics of beauty for horses - Among the characteristics of beauty for horses Horses are beautiful and have unique characteristics such as....

5. the presence of partridge has a hoof - I am not sure what you mean here?

6. white in the whites in the front - not sure about what you mean here either?

7. the capacity of the eyes - do you mean the beauty of their eyes?

8. black straightness  - I presume you are referring to a horses mane?

9. muscle strength - strength (you don't need the word "muscle" in this instance)

10. waist tightness. - I would suggest using the phrase "athletic physique"

 

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi again ,

me too . who does'nt love them ? well lukey you  I have never ride a horse .

5 I mean here if their legs are white when they put that metal thing, I don't know what is it could , but  it looks amazing .

6 if there is a white colour in their forehead it's one of the beautiful characterstics.

7 yes their eyes are big and beautiful it's also one of it's characterstics

8 yes 

what kind of horse do you love to ride  or in general ?

 

 

 

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Oh you should definitely go horse riding when you have the chance in the future smiley! I love to ride all different types of horses - but ones which are well-trained and not too wild haha!

5. I think you are referring to a horseshoe here. Is this correct? (If it is not, send me a link to an image of what you are referring to :)  )

6. I see. In that case you would say "horses which have white spots on their foreheads are particularly beautiful"

 

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yes exactly that's what I mean

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And thanks again for correcting my article 

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