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Hi Becky! Thank you! English words are still hard for me...

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To learn English

My name's Nemer Atef

I'm from Jordan 

I want to Learn English because my study need to be in a good level in English that will help me in easy way 

thank u 

 

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Hello, Nemer. I am glad you have made the attempt to improve your English.

The text you wrote is good, however, I would like to mention some points you can use to improve it.

 Actually, the "easy way" part of your reason for learning English is a little vague. I am going to rewrite your text and mention the points.

 

My name is Nemer Atef.

(Contractions are not incorrect, however, it is better not to use them in writing. Also, a period is required at the end.)

am from Jordan.

(The same points as the first sentence.)

I want to Learn English because my English has to be at a good level so that it can help me study easily(I am not sure, though, if you meant this or not).

(in a good level --> at a good level. When you learning English, you do not have to use long sentences. You can break them down so that you can express yourself in an easy way. Later, when you get to a higher level in English, you can use longer sentences.)

Thank you!

("u" is too colloquial and is good for text messages.)

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I learn : English (Beginner) French (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) German (Beginner)
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Hello Nemer Atef, welcome to Lingora! Great to have you here. smiley

I would be delighted to help you learn English. My suggestion would be for you to regularly post audios and texts of yourself practicing your speaking and writing skills on here. Then people like me and Aliakbar can help you improve! You can write and speak about anything you like. In the languages I learn, I like to tell people about my hobbies and my plans for the future.

With regards to your text, Aliakbar has done a great job correcting you. To add to what Aliakbar says, make sure you only use SMS language (like u etc)  when speaking to close friends / family in a (very) informal environment.

Thanks

 

Edmund.

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Hey,

Thanks for this!

I've reworded the extract in an alternative way than in the comments that have already been made so that you can see how it could be written differently:

My name is Nemer Atef and I'm from Jordan. I would like to learn English as I believe that having a better understanding of this language would help me to improve my grades in my current studies.

Thank you.

 

From this rewritten version of your text, you'll be able to see that you can use conjuctions like 'and' and 'so' to help your text flow better. You could also write a little more about what you are studying to give the text a bit more context.

Good luck with your studying!

Thanks,

Becky :)

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