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   The dialog will be between Jane and Alex .

 

Jane :Excuse me, are you Alex ?

Alex : yes ?

Jane  : I'm Jane Brown , I'm so pleased to meet you .

Alex: me too . How  it's going ?  did you  have a good flight ?

Jane : I'm fine , thanks for asking , yes , fairly pleasnt .

Alex: now let me help you carry  your bags.

Jane : thank you very much , that's very kind of you .

 

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kjcoffin's picture
I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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Jane :Excuse me, are you Alex ?

Alex : yes ?

Jane  : I'm Jane Brown , I'm so pleased to meet you .

Alex: me too. How it's How's it going ?  Did you have a good flight ?

Jane : I'm fine, thanks for asking. Yes, fairly pleasnt pleasant.

Alex: now let me help you carry your bags.

Jane : thank you very much, that's very kind of you .

 

Nice job, keep going!

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Thank you , I will keep it up smiley

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Ros Watson's picture
I learn : Italian (Beginner) French (Beginner)
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Very good and natural dialogue!  The only other thing I would add is, remember to start each sentence with a capital letter!

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Ros  thanks for the help  . heartyes

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Tatyana. Well done! Fantastic dialogue. Keep up the good work! Just keep in mind two important points:

  • You should start each sentence with a capital letter (As Ros has mentioned.)
  • Try to avoid extra spaces. Jane : -> Jane: / … a good flight ? -> … a good flight?

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   The dialog will be between Jane and Alex.

Jane: Excuse me, are you Alex?

Alex: Yes?

Jane: I'm Jane Brown, I'm so pleased to meet you. (Also, pleased or so pleased to meet you, to avoid repeating I’m.)

Alex: Me too. How’s it going?  Did you have a good flight?

Jane: I'm fine, thanks for asking. And yes, fairly pleasant.

Alex: Now let me help you carry your bags.

Jane: Thank you very much, that's very kind of you.

 


Keep up the good work!

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Aliakbar , I raally want to thank you for  your help ,I raelly appreciate  it . I will keep it up smileyyes

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