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Hi Oleks,

It sounds like there is trouble ahead...

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Thank you, Kealin!

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Hi Kealin! Thank you! "Won't be able to" sounds better...

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Hi Ed! Thank you! I will need to learn conditional...

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Conmoción in Perú

Hay conmoción en Perú debido a la muerte de ex-presidente García recientemente. García se suicidó y dejó una carta sobre su cuerpo diciendo que ya cumplió su misión y defiendose de las acusaciones de obteniendo sobornos para contractos de construcción. 

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Wil :
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Hay conmoción en Perú debido a la reciente muerte del ex-presidente García. García se suicidó y dejó una carta sobre su cuerpo diciendo que ya cumplió su misión y se defendió de las acusaciones de haber obtenido sobornos de contractos para la construcción.

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I learn : English (Intermediate) Italian (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner)
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Pretty good...  See the Wil's suggestions.

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Pedro Vazquez's picture
I learn : Portuguese (Beginner)
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Conmoción en Perú



Hola, mira aquí mi versión un poquito mas periodística y narrativa con el uso de los tiempos verbales. Palabras comunes compuestas de ex no llevan guión (i.e. expareja, expresidente, exjugador, etc):

Hay / existe una conmoción reciente(mente) en Perú debido a la muerte del expresidente García. (El señor) García se suicidó dejando una carta / nota  sobre su cuerpo diciendo que ya cumplió / había cumplido su misión y defendiendose de las acusaciones de haber obtenido sobornos a cambio de contractos en la construcción. 


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Muy bien, consiodera las observaciones que hace Wil.

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