( Advanteges of Sports)
Many studies showed that in the last few years death rates and diseases had increased very fast , so scientist found after years of efforts and hard working that sports have many benifits that will improve human lives, so sports one of the are entertaning activities that people can enjoy their time and in the same time it makes their life healtheir ; accordingly, people who exercise continously will claim a very precious benifits that will help them alot in their lives from many sides mental, physical, and social.
To start with , sports have many positive effects on people's mental health.First, sports improve human sleep at night , and it reduces stess, panic, pain, confusion , and anxiety for people whose life are full of stress like businessmen , students , and heads of state . Second , sports which relieve stress improve peopls's and it improves ones mood . Finally , sports which help people improving their mental health improves human concentration in daily life.
Inaddition, sports have many positive effect on people's physical health . First , sports strengthen your immune system, and it improves long function . Second , sports reduce blood pressure , control cholestrol, and it makes you sleep enough adequate amount of sleep and rest . Third , sports reduce the risk of heart disease and diabites , as a result it strengthens your heart strong . Finally , it improves joint flexibility and range of motion , and it manages your weight .
The last benifits of sports is social relationships , sports have many positive impact on people's social relationships and communications . First , sports build new connections between people by meeting each other in gym and in the parks , and it develops stronger relationships because they will meet each other continuosly . Finally , sports increase confidence to people who don't believe in themselves .
Indeed , scientists latest research showed that some people live longer than other people for some reasons . the first reason to live longer and healthier was that sports that make human life more intersting , pleasurable, and healthier . Second, sports have many advanteges on people life , it has a significant effects on their mental , physical ,and social health . I believe that sports is one of the ways that will improve human health and lifestyle .
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