Have you ever liked someone’s personality that led you eventually to write about it?
Well, I always have this problem to think of the person who I should write about, especially if you’re a picky person, this will make it much harder.
So let me drag your attention in describing a person who I wish to meet. He should be crazy and humorous like Jinan, so I can smoothly fell in love with him as well as forgiving him when he makes mistakes because I will know that this is an unintentional mistake made by an honest person.
He has to be calm like Razan, this personality will keep me safe and away from crowded life. Also to be resilient and sweetheart like Nadine who loves helping others. Childish like Rana, so I will not feel bored with him even if we spend all life together. People with tanned skin attract me more than people with white skin. So I wish if he will have a tanned and beautiful skin like Sanaa. Sportive body like Miss Najah, and to be communicative and inspiring like her. talkative like Nouhad. individualistic, self-sufficient, and self-made like Miss Nariman as well being intellectual like her. finally to have Amani’s innocence and when I find this person, I’ll let him meet her to teach him how to make the rat’s sounds that she makes.
1)note I meant by innocence at the end (the personality that children have). is it true to use innocence here?
2)regarding rats sounds, she always makes funny voices which make me laugh. I called these voices the rat's sounds.
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.