That night the storm was so strong than even the ghosts had hidden themselves at the old gothic church, after all they could felt that was not a natural storm, something was traying to pass through the gate of infinite and the old spirits of the town couldn't afford to rest.
At some point after midnight a powerful lightning stroke the lonely park in front of the church, the windows of the sourronding houses hardly stand the expantion wave, in fact several windows finished bronken. The electricity ran away after that and the wind howls like if a mad-giant werewolf were suddenly unleashed.
And then the gate opened and a human-shaped being passed through entering to this world. All the ghosts steped aside as if they needed to kept their inexinting breath while the alien wanderer started to walki over the grass.
The rain stopped, the wind calmed down and then one of the ghosts walked out from its shelter in order to get the foreigner. Once the strange ghost stood in front of the newcomer the other could hear these words:
- I'm glad your finally here, I waited for a long, long time.
- Almost 7000 years my friend, yours was a long watch indeed.
- 7000 years and now we have no time.
Then they fade away on the mist, and the ghosts whispered gazing to the dark skye:
- We should went to Heaven when we could, now is too late, Fenrir is on the loose...
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.