While the frightened ghosts was complaining bitterly about their excessive delay, a pair of wild, dark green eyes watched the scene from the top of the ancient church. In spite of the fact that the whole thing was disturbing, the eyes seemed quite calmed.
Once the alien and the strange ghost faded away in the mist, a tall and strong woman dropped from the roof of the church and her wild, dark green eyes stared with contempt at the scared ghosts.
- You are worthless, don’t deserve the gifts of darkness.
She said and then she departed in silence. She had no fear, but she was clear that the news needed to be known. After all the Elders had sent her to that place to watch in case something came through the Gate. And something, indeed, came through.
- Now the clock is ticking and the time for all the realms fades quickly. Millennia proved not to be enough so as to be ready for this.
She told to herself.
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.