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Travelling to Italy

<p class="rtecenter"><span style="font-size:16px;">Travelling to Italy&nbsp;</span></p>

<p><span style="font-size:16px;">&nbsp; &nbsp; Travelling to Italy is amazing because it does have&nbsp; much to offer such as&nbsp; &nbsp;wonderful museums, beautiful&nbsp; natural scenery,and ancient ruins.</span></p>

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Tatyana. Good job! Unfortunately, I have never had the chance to travel to Italy, however, I love the country. When did you visit Italy? What are the touristic attractions in Italy? What are some activities you can do there? Tell me all about it, I would love to know.

Your text is already fabulous. I tried to make minimal modifications to your text.

Traveling to Italy

Traveling to Italy is amazing because it does have much has a lot to offer, such as wonderful museums, beautiful natural sceneries, and ancient ruins.

Try to post longer text so that it can be evaluated better. Keep up the good work!

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Hi Aliakbar . Unfortunatlely , I've never visited Italy too sad , but I read a lot about it and about the very beautiful places there , their amazing and delicious food . It really has a lot to offer .I really love the country . But as an English  student  I have to write a lot to improve my writing , I want to say thanks for reading what I've wrote and I will keep it up .blushyes

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Hi Tatyana,

Welcome to Lingora.

I went to Italy a few years ago and loved it. I am from the UK (I live in Manchester now) and the weather here is terrible. As I type this post, it is currently raining (again) sad, whereas in Italy, it is almost always hot and sunny. Whereabouts in Italy did you go? I went to a nice place called Sorrento in southern Italy.

With regards to your English, Aliakbar has already done a good job of evaluating it.

As he says, make sure you continue to post longer texts on here. That way you will make a lot of progress in a short space of time :-)

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tatyana's picture
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Hi , As I said I didnt visit Italy before unfortunatlysad, but as an English student  I  have to write a lot to improve my English language because I'm still a first year student  .but  I've read a lot a bout it . I really love the country , so I hope I can visit it in the future , and inshallah I will keep it up smileyyes , thanks for reading it . and the only thing that I know about Sorrento that it's a town overlooking The Bay of Naples  and there is a small antique shops .smiley  

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Hi Tatyana!  Lovely post.  It would be good to hear more from you!  You don't need to change the word "scenery" as it's uncountable and shouldn't be made plural!  As well as saying "It does have much to offer" you could say "it has so much to offer".  

I'm very excited because I'm just about to go on holiday.  We are staying in Corfu for a few days and then taking the ferry to Bari in Southern Italy.  I have a house in a place called Ostuni which is parallel to Naples on the opposite coast!  It's about an hour's drive South of Bari.  

I hope you get to visit Italy one day.  It's such a beautiful place.

Ros

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Hello  Ros , thanks for the help   I really appreciate it and nice to hear that you 're just about to  go on a holiday especially to Italy . Thanks again for the help and enjoy it .heartsmiley

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