I remember when I was 19 years old or so I went to La Guajira. I decided to go because I found out a friend of mine was living there. After picking up my bike at my dad’s house I put on some clothes and fill up the tank with gas. As I was driving I didn’t see a pump that was close by to a school. My bike broke down and I had to call back to my house to ask for my brother’s advice. I almost gave up at fixing my bike and thought about turning my phone off and just head all my way back but my brother calmed me down. I broke up the right mirror while working on my bike and I got even more angry when I heard that somebody yelled at me “stupid” while their car disappeared from the distance. After my bike was nice and sound I tried looking for my phone and for my surprised it was dying so I had to plug it in at my bikes charger and I kept on going.
Long story short I had a blast while being there and I still remember it as it just happened.
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The learners ability to use nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc. correctly in sentences, using verb tenses accurately, and having the correct agreement between subjects and predicates. For instance, one would say "they were" instead of "they was."
There are 3-4 grammatical errors
There are 0-2 grammatical errors
There are 5 or more grammatical errors
The learner's ability to use certain marks to clarify meaning of their writing by grouping words grammatically into sentences and clauses and phrases.
There are 3-4 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 0-2 errors in capitalization and punctuation.
There are 5 or more errors in capitalization and punctuation.
The learners' ability to form words with the correct letters in the correct order
There are 3-4 spelling errors
There are 0-2 spelling errors
There are 5 or more spelling errors
The learner's ability to tailor the written work to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience
Mostly understandable. However, there are a few errors which cause confusion.
Easy to understand. Writing flows and keeps reader engaged.
Quite hard to understand.