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Vacations

My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday, they like to go to the beach and visit landmarks in my country.
In my situation, I like to go swim in the pool or go to eat at the restaurant then go to the movies also I like to go to the mall, I like to do different activities on holiday .

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I learn : Spanish (Beginner)
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 Hi! Your spelling is great!

I've just made a few changes below:

- My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday. The beach and famous landmarks in my country are some of their favourite places to visit.

- I like to do different activities on holiday, like going for a swim in the pool, or for a meal at a restaurant followed by a trip to the movies. 

Also, we usually say 'holidays' rather than 'vacations' in the UK. You'll usually hear 'vacation' used more often in America!   

Thanks,

Becky :)

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