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Hi Oleks,

It sounds like there is trouble ahead...

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Thank you, Kealin!

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Hi Kealin! Thank you! "Won't be able to" sounds better...

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Hi Ed! Thank you! I will need to learn conditional...

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Vacations

My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday, they like to go to the beach and visit landmarks in my country.
In my situation, I like to go swim in the pool or go to eat at the restaurant then go to the movies also I like to go to the mall, I like to do different activities on holiday .

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BeckyGreenBeans's picture
I learn : Spanish (Beginner)
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 Hi! Your spelling is great!

I've just made a few changes below:

- My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday. The beach and famous landmarks in my country are some of their favourite places to visit.

- I like to do different activities on holiday, like going for a swim in the pool, or for a meal at a restaurant followed by a trip to the movies. 

Also, we usually say 'holidays' rather than 'vacations' in the UK. You'll usually hear 'vacation' used more often in America!   

Thanks,

Becky :)

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Aliakbar Majidi's picture
I learn : French (Beginner) Persian (Expert) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hello there. Welcome to Lingora! I love vacations, too. Everybody has their own way of enjoying vacations, and that is yours. Good to know! I guess we have similar interests. I also like swimming, eating at restaurants, and going to the mall.

Regarding your text, here is a rewritten version for you to compare to the original.

My family and my friends like to go to different places on holiday. Some of the places they would like to visit include the beach and famous landmarks in my country.

As for me, I like swimming in the pool, eating out at restaurants, going to the movies, shopping at malls, and doing some activities.

I look forward to your future posts. Keep up the good work!

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