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Thank you, Faye! I will try to do as you say.

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Hi Faye! Thank you for your link! You helped me a lot. I...

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Hello everyone, it's Friday ,such a beautiful day.Well, today it's raining cats and dogs .
I'm studying drama now and you can't imagine how amazing that you're studying while you can hear it's raining .Actually I really like to hear the rain.
Anyway today is a beautiful day , enjoy it, and take care.
Blessed Friday, and God bless.

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Oh and I forgot to say that it's 13° now in Jordan.What is the weather like in your countries?

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Faye W.C.'s picture
I learn : French (Beginner)
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Hi Tatyana, in my city in North Carolina it was in the 70s today. 

Hello everyone, it's Friday. It is such a beautiful day. Well, today it's raining cats and dogs .

I'm studying drama now and you can't imagine how amazing that you're studying while you can hear it's raining .Actually I really like to hear the rain.

Anyway today is a beautiful day , enjoy it, and take care.

Blessed Friday, and God bless.

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Thank you Faye for correcting my article.
Can you tell me more about Carolina?

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Karin Brauner's picture
I learn : German (Beginner)
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I agree with Faye's corrections above. 

Maybe a longer text might help us give you some more in-depth feedback, but I like the use of colloquialisms and things that we might say here in the UK or in other English-Speaking countries that might not be so well known to non-native speakers, so well done! 

In Brighton, England where I am, it's been around 18-20 degrees celcius since Wednesday, which is really nice. I'm originally from Guatemala and used to warmer weather. I thrive in the warmth! My husband doesn't like it as much, he's a winter person! I don't understand it, I get energised by the sunshine, as I imagine many of us do!

 

Keep going, looking forward to your next text!

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Karin
Thank you for your note ,I appreciate it .
I will keep it up.

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I learn : Spanish (Intermediate)
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Hello everyone, it's Friday, such a beautiful day. Well, today it's raining cats and dogs .

I'm studying drama now and you can't imagine how amazing it is that you're studying while you can hear that it's raining. Actually, I really like to hear the rain.

Anyway, today is a beautiful day. Enjoy it (no comma) and take care.

Have a blessed Friday and God bless.

Good job. Remember that you don't need a space between the last word in your sentence and the period

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Kjcoffin
Thank you for your note, I appreciate it. I will keep it up.

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Hi Tatyana!

Wow - it must be rare for it to rain in Jordan. How often does it rain each year? In England the weather has improved a lot. It is such a shame (due to the virus) we cannot meet up in large groups of people and spend the days in parks or on the beach :-(

Would you like to be an Actress in the future? If so what kind of films/plays/TV shows would you like to play a role in?

Your English is very impressive in this text!

I just have the following comment

1. you can't imagine how amazing that you're studying while you can hear it's raining - you can't imagine how amazing it is to study/ studying while you can hear the rain (Come to England and you'll hear the rain virtually every day while you study haha)

Take care of yourself and stay safe smiley

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi again ,
Actually I'm not interested in acting, but I do like films ,tv shows, and plays .
When I said drama I meant there my book /subject is called drama we don't act or do plays unfortunately we study it from the book ,now we 're studying King Oedipus And what happened to him , actually it's amazing this my first time reading a play in English , and I saw a film about this play but it's too old ,it helps me a lot in understanding the whole story .
Insallah I hope so ,Hahahah it will amazing.
Thank you ,you too take and stay safe.

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