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Thank you, Faye! Your options is better.

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Thank you, Faye! I will try to do as you say.

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Hi Faye! Thank you for your link! You helped me a lot. I...

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Hi Ed! Thank you! No questions, you explained everything...

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Hi Ed! Thank you! I constantly forget about this nuance...

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Hello , long time I didn't write .Finally , I have finished my exams . It was a very harsh time for all students . So I decide to write after taking a rest  from online exams and studying . About my plans to the next months I decided to learn how to drive and to take drive lessons so seems will take a little bit time . After few days I will start my next semester .I'm financially in my 3rd year  .I'm so excited . I really love face to face learning and communication rather than online studying . I didn't enjoy my time this semester maybe because I missed my friends and the way we talk ,laugh,and how we run to catch up our lecture .hahah you have to see us laugh. I think technology gave us alot of things but maybe she forget to give us the most important thing which is emotions , gestures , feelings, and eye contact which is for me the most important thing we can know from these things  alot . So it gave us happienes ,the temporary one not permanant.

I've learnt alot this period of time .I've leant that it's important to have more than one job in the same house or to the same person after watching what happend to other people in this dilemma , I watch them on TV. I've leant how to bake a cake and how to cook  pasta  hahah . Also one of the most beautiful things that happend during the covid 19 that all the families communicate with each other more than any time before . One of the most funny things that happend to me during the covid 19  I've  recieved a lot of friend requests on Facebook  which was hilarious. haha and like 20 friend requests per day and most of them were boys .hahahah. 

Hope you all are safe and happy .Stay home stay safe .

God bless

 

 

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edhutchins88's picture
I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Great to hear from you Tatyana smiley

I am so glad you have finished your exams now and can have a nice rest. When do you find out the results of the exams you have done?

Learning how to drive is a great skill to have. How are you finding it? I remember I found it very difficult at first but then it slowly became easier.

I know what you mean about face-to-face learning. It is simply much more effective than online learning.

That's amazing you got so many friend requests on Facebook. You must be very popular. I wish I was that popular hahaha!

I hope you and your family, friends and people around you all continue to stay safe too :)

 

Your writing in this extract is amazing! So well done yes I just have the following comments

1. long time I didn't write  - I haven't written on here for a long time.

2. So I decide to write - So I decided to write

3. About my plans to the next months - About/With regards to my plans for the next few months,

4. drive lessons - driving lessons

5. so seems will take a little bit time  - so it seems it will take a little bit of time

6. I'm financially in my 3rd year  - I'm in my 3rd year  (not so sure why you used the word "financially" here??)

7. how we run to catch up our lecture - how we ran to get to our lectures on time

8. I think technology gave us alot of things but maybe she forget to give us - I think technology gives us a lot of things but maybe it forgot to give us

9. the most important thing which is emotions , gestures , feelings, and eye contact - the most important things which are emotions , gestures , feelings, and eye contact

10. happienes  - happiness

11. I've leant  - I've learnt

12One of the most funny things that happend to me during the covid 19  I've  recieved a lot of friend requests on Facebook  - One of the most funny things that has happened to me during Covid 19 is that  I've  received a lot of friend requests on Facebook 

 

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi again , it was very nice to hear from you 

thanks for correcting my text . How is it with you  with the Arabic language ? if you need any help  I will be here .I'm going to upload new posts about the Arabic language in the next days .So what do you like me to post / write about ? 

Our marks will be soon on our page . I still didn't start learning how to drive but I'm reading the book  but inshallah  afew  days I will start .

About the online learning yes absoulotly I agree with you . I'm so sure hahah.

And again thank you for correcting my text 

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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My Arabic language learning is going well thank you! I am learning about how to talk about the different types of food I like/dislike! I have been meaning to post on Arabic these past few weeks and will definitely post something this weekend smiley (even though I don't feel prepared hahaha)

It would be amazing if you could post something about how to talk about sports (like tennis, football and  running etc) in Arabic, as I am planning to learn about that next yes

 

Best of luck with your exam results. I am sure you will do extremely well. You put in so much effort and time! Let me know how you do :-)

Take care ;-)

 

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi again , Insallah I will post something about sports this weekend .

that's great , keep up  the good  work . By the way , how do you find Arabic language now is it still difficult ? can you now write something or read a small paragraph ? 

I belive in this sentence " practice ,practice ,practice " my teacher once told me that Ihave to practice if I want to speak and understand English and I'm still working on it .

Do you know any apps that I can use to help me in my English ( like the word beautiful it also have another meaning  magnificent  and so on ....) I guess it's called synonyms 

so if you that will be great . I intend to learn a lot of vocabs as much as I can  this year .

and thank you for correcting my textsmiley

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I learn : Chinese (Beginner) French (Beginner) German (Beginner) Portuguese (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner) Arabic (Beginner)
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Arabic is still exceedingly difficult and confusing, though I am making some good progress. I try to learn one or two new words and phrases each day. I can say and write very small and simple sentences. I was planning to post something on Arabic this weekend but got a bit too busy with other things. I am certainly going to do it very soon :)

Practice is so important.

Have you heard of https://www.lingq.com/en/ ? IAs you are more of an advanced English language learner, I would definitely advise you to takt a look at this app/website. Have you heard of it before?

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tatyana's picture
I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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That's great keep going, yes that's true Arabic Language is the most difficult Language.
I will definitely see This website,
No I haven't heard of it before.
Thank you alot for advising me to see it.

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I learn : French (Beginner)
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Great job Tatyana! 

 



I'm glad that you were able to make it through your final exams. Yes Covid-19 has brought about good and bad things so it is great that you have found good use of your time. Keep up the good work. 

Hello , it has been a long time since I have written. Finally , I have finished my exams . It was a very harsh time for all students . So I decided to write after taking a rest  from online exams and studying . My plans to the next months I have decided to learn how to drive and to take driving lessons so seems will take a little bit time . After few days I will start my next semester .I'm financially in my 3rd year  .I'm so excited . I really love face to face learning and communication rather than online studying . I didn't enjoy my time this semester maybe because I missed my friends and the way we talk ,laugh,and how we run to catch up our lecture .hahah you have to see us laugh. I think technology gave us alot of things but maybe she it forgot to give us the most important thing which is emotions , gestures , feelings, and eye contact which is for me the most important thing. we can know from these things  alot . So it gave us happienes ,the temporary one not permanant.

I've learnt alot in this period of time. I've learned that it's important to have more than one job in the same house or to the same person after watching what happend to other people in this dilemma. From what I have watched on TV. I've learned how to bake a cake and how to cook  pasta  hahah . Also one of the most beautiful things that happend during the covid 19 that all the families communicate with each other more than any time before . One of the most funny things that happened to me during the covid 19,  I've  recieved a lot of friend requests on Facebook  which was hilarious. haha and like 20 friend requests per day and most of them were boys .hahahah. 

Hope you all are safe and happy .Stay home stay safe .

God bless


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I learn : English (Intermediate) Turkish (Beginner) Spanish (Beginner)
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Hi Faye 

thank you for correcting my text  .smiley

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